Seems Sketchy to Me.

Is Yuna saying that or I? You'll never know~
If I use hatching to depict the pink of her hair and sailor fuku, I could use straight diagnal lines for the clothing and organic directional lines for the hair. I could also use heavy black cell shading on the bow to help differentiate it from the hanging bangs.

Is this better than the grayscale from yesterday? Would you prefer a black sailor fuku to "pink" in this style?

(Not an image of ideal beauty.)